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JoKLy Wrote:Dear "Fuck You/ James"
The previous post, is that which i agree,
It is quite like watching "You, me and Dupree".
Your posts, "Fuck You", are extremely thick,
It's like seeing a over-sized, and retarded dick.

Remix the professional, may not know it all,
but he knows enough to cause your downfall.
Enjambment, I shall use to provide this a sense of taste,
breathe in, breathe out, then eat some toothpaste.

My posts may not make sense to you,
but that is because you are a huge poo.
Henceforth the need to rhyme,
to even let children understand the importance of time.

They should not use it to flame,
but should use it to gain legitimate fame.
Doctors, architects, social workers to name a few,
understand more of common sense, than the most retarded you.

Although my word choice may be dumb,
you are a fucking... OUCH! I BIT MY THUMB.
The previous line was not meant to humor,
but instead, it is just a lowlife rumor.

So next time you seek to flame,
understand my riddle,
or you'll be playing with a fiddle.

You're insignificance is something of a rarity,
but let me explain to you with deep clarity.
Everything you say could be true,
but honestly none of it's new.

Good job expressing your feelings in a way you see fit,
just remember that I don't give a shit.
You're expression of rhyming is a joke,
it's like you're some British bloke.

Trying to cash in on a flamer in the right,
adios, c'est la vie, fuck you, good night.
You're shit is so old, it's rank and stinky,
why don't you sit back down and suck on your twinky.

You make this a joke which it is not,
some common sense you must have forgot.
Because this is not the flame section,
you trying to win an election?
Showing off to a crowd who doesn't care,
or for that matter, is even there.

To change a rhythm of a rhyme,
may be a bit of a crime.
But let's do it just this once,
to show you you're a dunce.

Essence of time, that is to say,
has no particular part to play,
within my flame, or in any way,
so let us have you sit and stay,
because I will remind you on this day,
that in this waking hour, you shall pray,
for me to take your life away.

The fact of the matter is of course,
that upon me your thoughts you do force.
I have cognition of common sense,
your judgement is very dense.
Let's leave this matter to rest,
or I will put your mind to the test.

Messages In This Thread
It's Time - by Ʈɧɘ ℛɩđđℒэʀ - Dec 04 2011, 07:03 PM
RE: It's Time - by Assassin - Dec 04 2011, 07:15 PM
RE: It's Time - by _RemiX - Dec 05 2011, 12:38 AM
RE: It's Time - by Ʈɧɘ ℛɩđđℒэʀ - Dec 05 2011, 01:59 AM
RE: It's Time - by _RemiX - Dec 05 2011, 03:31 AM
RE: It's Time - by JoKLy - Dec 05 2011, 03:51 AM
RE: It's Time - by pTK - Dec 05 2011, 04:11 AM
RE: It's Time - by JoKLy - Dec 05 2011, 04:27 AM
RE: It's Time - by Spartacus - Dec 05 2011, 07:12 AM
RE: It's Time - by JoKLy - Dec 05 2011, 10:06 AM
RE: It's Time - by Ʈɧɘ ℛɩđđℒэʀ - Dec 05 2011, 05:31 PM
RE: It's Time - by henry - Dec 05 2011, 10:54 PM
RE: It's Time - by The Witch King - Dec 10 2011, 02:40 AM

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