Apr 25 2012, 05:24 AM
Try to keep in mind that this kid is likely a young junior high school student, and try [hard] to remember what writing assignments were like for you back in the day. Unless you grew up an avid reader, I'm guessing it was pretty tough shit that got far worse if your teacher dissected your efforts mercilessly.
Dreams will learn to research better. For any kid his age, that much is nearly a given. Though it's easy to point out the errors in his arguments, more than finding the perfect argument, it looks like he needs help structuring his own ideas and arguments into a readable order and format, and learning what grammatical mistakes he made.
I think it commendable that he tried hard to come up with his own arguments and ideas instead of merely rewording or copying and pasting some else's. I'll post my suggestions later.
Dreams will learn to research better. For any kid his age, that much is nearly a given. Though it's easy to point out the errors in his arguments, more than finding the perfect argument, it looks like he needs help structuring his own ideas and arguments into a readable order and format, and learning what grammatical mistakes he made.
I think it commendable that he tried hard to come up with his own arguments and ideas instead of merely rewording or copying and pasting some else's. I'll post my suggestions later.
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George, Of The Jungle Jun 29, 2012:
Is this the profile of a bear?? Hmm, I didn't know bears were capable of playing css. Don't they break the keyboard with their massive paws? This is very peculiar and requires further investigation. If this is true, no one knows what kind of risks this might hold. They might electrocute themselves, maybe they become addicted to the game causing them to neglect their parental tasks. What must become of their offspring?
I will select a team consisting of the world's foremost scientists that will go about this scientific quest in the uttermost professional manner. This taskforce will carry the name "CANBURZREALLYPLAYCOUWNTERTRIKE - HUHWHUT????". I trust upon these men a task of huge importance, the fate of bearkind may depend on it. Godspeed men, Godspeed!